Tha Poetry thread XD

hehe I just had to create a poetry thread here is one I wrote like...three weeks ago or sumthin' lol. Put in mind that this is how I see love, so dun bash me if something is wrong according to you lol






The most romantic
love...is the kind that can never be...thus love grows stronger as the distance
grows wider...closer, closer they get, thinner the thread may become...and in
the end...thy desire is only thy lover...but it might never be...love is a
painful joy...thus to strong for many, to weak for some....alas love...is
something life likes to play with....oh love...love brings you happiness...
love brings you sorry... though you are the one...who chooses the direction of
witch way love shalt tread...





Love so beautiful yet so
deadly, so deceiving oh so blinding. Oh dear love…yes love…a tool of abusage, a
way of happiness. Two souls combined, two souls on the thread of
feelings…feelings for love, feelings for happiness…thus with love…happiness can
turn to hatred…joy can turn to sadness...yes…love can be used by god, love can
be used by the devil…love can be used by you…alas you’re the one to choose…what
love shall do to you, to thy soul and thy future…






there you go, some crap i wrote when i was bored, lol

Dan that's awesome !


Love is a painful joy...Now that is true! ^^

X3

Keep up the good work!!

I hvnt written in a long time so...here I go:

When it seems all so dark,
Surrounded by all that is scary,
A single tear falls.
I look up the unknown sky
And hope to find my way,
I wondered if I'll be okay...
A shooting star passed by me
And told me not to give up
On the precious jewel that is life.
Keep on walking
And keep on falling,
Until you finally reach home.
Keep on singing,
As you lead the way,
For you'll be one step closer
To you.

i just wrote these yesterday and the day before...nothing special i guess..

bleeding wrist
razor cuts
ending bliss
suicide attempt

save her life
depression sinks in
bury the knife
a new life will begin

her baby is born
her mothers heart
once torn
is whole once more
__________________________
just to prove the fact that i hate meth, not always the person using it...


i stood and yell
you pushed
i fell
once again

you throw a fist
i punch
but missed
you hit

my face is bleeding
you stare
as i lay there pleading
"STOP IT!!!, please!"

im inches from death
i know it's not your fault
it's the meth
controling you once again

you hit me again
i gasp for air
as you stab me with a pen
just finish me!

your head shook side to side
he took out the gun
out came lead
now he's dead

as i lay there
suffering, but alive
almost dead and scared
i lost my only true love